Omega's Capture (PDF)

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  • Omega's Capture
  • Lillian Sable
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  • 22 October 2018
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Omega's Capture review Ô 103 St her will She wants to fight him even as every cell in her body has come to crave his touch But. Ianthe s deception has been discovered Legion has uncovered her status as an Omega and promptly claimed her as his His Omega Now a prisoner in Legion s compound Ianthe is cut off from her family though Legion says that he ll allow her contact with them if she makes it worth his while Warning This is a dark fantasy Omegaverse Dytopian tale that does include abuse dubnon con scenes that might stretch comfort zones and graphic sex This sort of story is intended for fans who appreciate this form of literature Consider yourself warnedWarning This is a second in serial dark fantasy erotic romance series which means the story is incomplete with many unanswered uestions left hanging that ends with a major cliffhanger Cost breakdown on Omega s Deception 131 pages299Omega s Capture 145 pages399Omega s Binding 137 pages399no further installments in series available or published but probableSecond in serial series installment that picks up immediently after Omega s Deception More details are revealed as follow ups for unresolved issues from the previous book though new open ended story line sub plots are added This book includes graphic erotic scenes and centers on the actual day to day evolving relationship between Legion Ianthe It isn t until the later portion of the story that the beginning of this story s major cliffhanger ending is introduced Another whopper of a cliffie My issues Pet peeve when story line details and premises are changed or altered to reflect a different take on things Also how many times does Legion get to renege on a promise Seriously While I m a fan of the serial I wish I had waited for a box settotal series one book before grabbing this Witness in Death romance series which means the story is incomplete with many unanswered uestions left hanging that ends with a major cliffhanger Cost breakdown on Omega s Deception 131 pages299Omega s Capture 145 pages399Omega s Binding 137 pages399no further installments in series available or published but probableSecond in serial series installment that picks up immediently after Omega s Deception More details are The Legend of Parshu Raam revealed as follow ups for unresolved issues from the previous book though new open ended story line sub plots are added This book includes graphic erotic scenes and centers on the actual day to day evolving A Place In The Shade relationship between Legion Ianthe It isn t until the later portion of the story that the beginning of this story s major cliffhanger ending is introduced Another whopper of a cliffie My issues Pet peeve when story line details and premises are changed or altered to Children of Dune reflect a different take on things Also how many times does Legion get to 13 Sculptures Children Should Know renege on a promise Seriously While I m a fan of the serial I wish I had waited for a box settotal series one book before grabbing this

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Omega's Capture review Ô 103 She never wanted to be Omega Ianthe is trapped in the clutches of the Alpha who claimed her again. 35 StarsI was hesitant to start the second book of this series because of all the reviews Honestly Legion didn t really bother me What bothered me was the flow of the story There s a huge disconnect between the main characters and don t even get me started on the endingI enjoyed the first book because Ianthe was a curious character for me I liked that she was trying to hide that she was an Omega and I liked where the first book endedWhen Ianthe wakes up in Legion s place all Hell breaks loose I get the dominate and submission play I truly get it but there s a finesse to it I don t think the author got the grasp just yetI found Ianthe s character very hard to be liked in the second book Her pride and stubbornness made her character annoying I thought she was a touch too much I couldn t take her lashing out at everyone including the lady that washed her up I mean she didn t want to get out of the bathtub to prove that she didn t have to listen to her Sheesh talk about a bratI thought Ianthe would try a little harder to communicate to home I m glad that was brought out finally towards the middle but instead of her trying so hard to go home I wanted her to fight to make sure her family was okay I kind of wanted to see the family moved in too so Ianthe would have someone to talk to and confide toI also thought Ianthe s family was a little annoying her sister since her brother wasn t there but I think the book needed a little positive and some support to help the flow of the story to move along better When the entire book is angst it becomes too much I thought the side plot of the King and Legion s problem was lacking It felt like two stories being told and it needed to be mixed into the main story better There was a lot of talking but no real action I felt like maybe Ianthe could have been written into this storyline too just to make the flow betterThen there was the ending It did a 180 and it completely broke apart the flow of the story There was no small lead up or anything that could point in that direction and I believe that was the downfall of the book It would have been better to ease into this new story plot OR save the story plot for the next book once things were established Overall I ll still read the series but I would like to see1 Better flow Make sure there s a good transition of of plot and side plot and somehow work everything into one plot so it moves better2 Less descriptive writing I don t need to know what the entire room looks like or what the characters are thinking 247 I m pretty sure I knew Ianthe wanted to go home from the first moment Keep the descriptive writing down I consider this filler writing3 Be a little positive Like I said I didn t mind Legion s character but Ianthe lashing out at the maid and having an awful sister didn t help the angst or negative vibe of the book The main character needed at least one support system just to bring the book up a bit and keep the reader happy4 This is just me but kink and steam Make it a smutty bookThe positivesI liked Legion s character I might be the minority on this one I m into dark books and his dominance and meanness didn t bother me I liked him because he s so dead set on Ianthe and I m a sucker for when the Hero chases after the HeroineThat s my two cents The Legend of Parshu Raam reviews Honestly Legion didn t A Place In The Shade really bother me What bothered me was the flow of the story There s a huge disconnect between the main characters and don t even get me started on the endingI enjoyed the first book because Ianthe was a curious character for me I liked that she was trying to hide that she was an Omega and I liked where the first book endedWhen Ianthe wakes up in Legion s place all Hell breaks loose I get the dominate and submission play I truly get it but there s a finesse to it I don t think the author got the grasp just yetI found Ianthe s character very hard to be liked in the second book Her pride and stubbornness made her character annoying I thought she was a touch too much I couldn t take her lashing out at everyone including the lady that washed her up I mean she didn t want to get out of the bathtub to prove that she didn t have to listen to her Sheesh talk about a bratI thought Ianthe would try a little harder to communicate to home I m glad that was brought out finally towards the middle but instead of her trying so hard to go home I wanted her to fight to make sure her family was okay I kind of wanted to see the family moved in too so Ianthe would have someone to talk to and confide toI also thought Ianthe s family was a little annoying her sister since her brother wasn t there but I think the book needed a little positive and some support to help the flow of the story to move along better When the entire book is angst it becomes too much I thought the side plot of the King and Legion s problem was lacking It felt like two stories being told and it needed to be mixed into the main story better There was a lot of talking but no Children of Dune real action I felt like maybe Ianthe could have been written into this storyline too just to make the flow betterThen there was the ending It did a 180 and it completely broke apart the flow of the story There was no small lead up or anything that could point in that direction and I believe that was the downfall of the book It would have been better to ease into this new story plot OR save the story plot for the next book once things were established Overall I ll still 13 Sculptures Children Should Know read the series but I would like to see1 Better flow Make sure there s a good transition of of plot and side plot and somehow work everything into one plot so it moves better2 Less descriptive writing I don t need to know what the entire The Economics of Business Enterprise An Introduction to Economic Organisation and the Theory of the Firm Third Edition room looks like or what the characters are thinking 247 I m pretty sure I knew Ianthe wanted to go home from the first moment Keep the descriptive writing down I consider this filler writing3 Be a little positive Like I said I didn t mind Legion s character but Ianthe lashing out at the maid and having an awful sister didn t help the angst or negative vibe of the book The main character needed at least one support system just to bring the book up a bit and keep the Warum macht die Nudel dumm? reader happy4 This is just me but kink and steam Make it a smutty bookThe positivesI liked Legion s character I might be the minority on this one I m into dark books and his dominance and meanness didn t bother me I liked him because he s so dead set on Ianthe and I m a sucker for when the Hero chases after the HeroineThat s my two cents

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Omega's Capture review Ô 103 There is to Legion than meets the eye and Ianthe will suffer before she learns all of his secret. The relationship goes another way than what I expected when he tries to negotiate her submission for the well being of her family The housekeeper bit was a bit pointless and there is no real character building for her But I like it that she is kept in the dark for most of his business negotiations and all the other boring city stuff view spoilerI don t understand how he purposely got her pregnant knowing that he is putting her in harms way by getting arrested and charged No one was supposed to know about his secret location but they surrounded the place very uickly hide spoiler